参考范文
Are people becoming addicted to technology?【1】Technology has penetrated into every corner of modern society,ranging from manufacturing industry to family life.【2〗To some extent,people are becoming addicted to technology
【3】First of all, modern people seem to live on technology products.We get connected with each other via Internet, shop online with mobilephones, and enjoy self-service on machines in banks and restaurants.【4】However, many people tend to go to extremes. They rely so heavilyon their cellphones that they feel unease once they are not having theircellphones around for more than five minutes. Another typical example isthat with the appearance of various social video Apps like TikTok andKuaishou, people can’t resist the temptation of them. They are addictedto the virtual world and even forget to eat, work and communicate withfamily members or friends.【5】Moreover, 【6】numerous studies claim thataddiction to technology is real and it has the same effect on the brain as drugaddiction,
【7】Therefore, it is advisable for modern people to reasonably reducetheir addiction to technology while enjoying the convenience brought by it.Nothing should go overboard.
精彩点评
背景描述,引出话题。1
【2】提出论点:人们正在变得对科技上瘾。
【3】【4】【5】通过 First of all、However 和 Moreover 层次递进的方式对论点展开论证。
【6】利用题目要求给出的科学证据增强文章说服力。
【7】得出结论并提出建议。
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